Posted May 1, 2018 (edited) She will twist about, pull him there, knock him down. She is a confusing wirlwind. He makes his decisions. He is adamant, principled, He stands firm like iron She will dance all around him making his eyes see myriad colors of flower, sky, and leaves She loves him because he holds still for her, entranced, dedicated. He loves her because she is confusing and full of beginnings. I thought the last time was the last time, but i feel like sharing it with strangers was more important to me than sharing it with the ones i thought i knew. Edited May 1, 2018 by Vassago You know what , fuck editing anymore. Done 6 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted May 1, 2018 I don't think it needs editing at all. I the the i's add character to the piece. I actually like this one. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted May 1, 2018 Timely and poignant in my case. Vassago, time for a colection of your works. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites